Look at the setting and the character's state of mind, and then think about what you want the reader to see. Is there a descriptive symbol or two that works naturally within the scene to help foreshadow an event or theme, or create insight into the character's emotional plight?
In Nature:
Redwoods
Big, leafy trees
Fruit-bearing trees
Lush green grass
Mineral springs
Running water
Rain
Fruits and vegetables
Organic foods
Whole foods
Fresh air
In Society:
Long life
Pink cheeks
Ideal body weight
Sparkling eyes
Smooth skin
White teeth
Strength
YouthChubby babies
Fertility
Yoga/exercise
A treadmill
An apple a day
Doctors
Caduceus (see picture)
A stethoscope
Vitamins
A heart
A pedometer
Bottled water
Vegetarians/Vegans
These are just a few examples of things one might associate with health. Some are more powerful than others. Fruits and vegetables are strong symbols, and likely will not require reinforcement. However, a heart could stand for a number of different things and not foreshadow health on its own. Let the story's tone decide if one strong symbol or several smaller ones work the best.
8 comments:
Nice...I feel healthy just reading this!
Great Job, Becca!
Angela
Already I can feel the first blush of spring reading this post!
I like the idea of Redwoods as a symbol of health. Never in a million years would I have thought of that. :-)
Just have to tell you - I was filling out a worksheet yesterday for my WIP (a first for me actually because I don't outline, I'm a total pantser, but was having trouble with this one) Anyway, it asked "How can you foreshadow this?" And all I could think of was your blog, and these entries! My mind is now organized in lists that look a lot like these thesaurus entries... LOL
This was a fun one to write--no worries about what weird pictures might come up when I researched :).
Lisa, I'm so glad these are helpful. I wish my mind was organized like our thesaurus entries, lol.
Ooh, I like this one. Kind of different from the usual.
Great, as usual. And now I'm going to go back and reread your post on over expressed emotions! :)
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